My First ESV Review: Psalm 51

I haven’t received my free ESV Bible yet, but I thought I’d get the review ball rolling anyhow. I’ll start off with something easy - Psalm 51. It’s my favorite psalm and may even be my favorite bit of Scripture. I’ll review the lexical and grammatical choices made in translating this chapter. Below is the psalm from the RSV (my favorite translation), the ESV, and the NAB (the officially endorsed Catholic translation in the U.S. and a example of banality raised to an artform).
RSV ESV NAB
1: Have mercy on me, O God, according to thy steadfast love; according to thy abundant mercy blot out my transgressions. 1 Have mercy on me, O God, according to your steadfast love; according to your abundant mercy blot out my transgressions. 3 Have mercy on me, God, in your goodness; in your abundant compassion blot out my offense.
2: Wash me thoroughly from my iniquity, and cleanse me from my sin! 2 Wash me thoroughly from my iniquity, and cleanse me from my sin! 4 Wash away all my guilt; from my sin cleanse me.
3: For I know my transgressions, and my sin is ever before me. 3 For I know my transgressions, and my sin is ever before me. 5 For I know my offense; my sin is always before me.
4: Against thee, thee only, have I sinned, and done that which is evil in thy sight, so that thou art justified in thy sentence and blameless in thy judgment. 4 Against you, you only, have I sinned and done what is evil in your sight, so that you may be justified in your words and blameless in your judgment. 6 Against you alone have I sinned; I have done such evil in your sight That you are just in your sentence, blameless when you condemn.
5: Behold, I was brought forth in iniquity, and in sin did my mother conceive me. 5 Behold, I was brought forth in iniquity, and in sin did my mother conceive me. 7 True, I was born guilty, a sinner, even as my mother conceived me.
6: Behold, thou desirest truth in the inward being; therefore teach me wisdom in my secret heart. 6 Behold, you delight in truth in the inward being, and you teach me wisdom in the secret heart. 8 Still, you insist on sincerity of heart; in my inmost being teach me wisdom.
7: Purge me with hyssop, and I shall be clean; wash me, and I shall be whiter than snow. 7 Purge me with hyssop, and I shall be clean; wash me, and I shall be whiter than snow. 9 Cleanse me with hyssop, that I may be pure; wash me, make me whiter than snow.
8: Fill me with joy and gladness; let the bones which thou hast broken rejoice. 8 Let me hear joy and gladness; let the bones that you have broken rejoice. 10 Let me hear sounds of joy and gladness; let the bones you have crushed rejoice.
9: Hide thy face from my sins, and blot out all my iniquities. 9 Hide your face from my sins, and blot out all my iniquities. 11 Turn away your face from my sins; blot out all my guilt.
10: Create in me a clean heart, O God, and put a new and right spirit within me. 10 Create in me a clean heart, O God, and renew a right spirit within me. 12 A clean heart create for me, God; renew in me a steadfast spirit.
11: Cast me not away from thy presence, and take not thy holy Spirit from me. 11 Cast me not away from your presence, and take not your Holy Spirit from me. 13 Do not drive me from your presence, nor take from me your holy spirit.
12: Restore to me the joy of thy salvation, and uphold me with a willing spirit. 12 Restore to me the joy of your salvation, and uphold me with a willing spirit. 14 Restore my joy in your salvation; sustain in me a willing spirit.
13: Then I will teach transgressors thy ways, and sinners will return to thee. 13 Then I will teach transgressors your ways, and sinners will return to you. 15 I will teach the wicked your ways, that sinners may return to you.
14: Deliver me from bloodguiltiness, O God, thou God of my salvation, and my tongue will sing aloud of thy deliverance. 14 Deliver me from bloodguiltiness, O God, O God of my salvation, and my tongue will sing aloud of your righteousness. 16 Rescue me from death, God, my saving God, that my tongue may praise your healing power.
15: O Lord, open thou my lips, and my mouth shall show forth thy praise. 15 O Lord, open my lips, and my mouth will declare your praise. 17 Lord, open my lips; my mouth will proclaim your praise.
16: For thou hast no delight in sacrifice; were I to give a burnt offering, thou wouldst not be pleased. 16 For you will not delight in sacrifice, or I would give it; you will not be pleased with a burnt offering. 18 For you do not desire sacrifice; a burnt offering you would not accept.
17: The sacrifice acceptable to God is a broken spirit; a broken and contrite heart, O God, thou wilt not despise. 17 The sacrifices of God are a broken spirit; a broken and contrite heart, O God, you will not despise. 19 My sacrifice, God, is a broken spirit; God, do not spurn a broken, humbled heart.
18: Do good to Zion in thy good pleasure; rebuild the walls of Jerusalem, 18 Do good to Zion in your good pleasure; build up the walls of Jerusalem; 20 Make Zion prosper in your good pleasure; rebuild the walls of Jerusalem.
19: then wilt thou delight in right sacrifices, in burnt offerings and whole burnt offerings; then bulls will be offered on thy altar. 19 then will you delight in right sacrifices, in burnt offerings and whole burnt offerings; then bulls will be offered on your altar. 21 Then you will be pleased with proper sacrifice, burnt offerings and holocausts; then bullocks will be offered on your altar.

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